it close.. very close ..my head was like a tea cup.. a torment of torrenting toughts .like a storm it was close.brewing ever so slowly yet ever so dangerously .arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh !@#k damn the!#@4 ahhhhhhhhh. screamin not new in or to my head .personally im gettin quiet tired
of it.....
there was nothin left to hang on to it was over.it was all over . the only thing tht made me realise tht this wasnt a dream is wen the i hit the ground .it felt clear ohh all so clear and evryting jsu fit into place .like a million peace jig saw of the sky come togetther finaly it jus fell into place ..I FELL into place.rite were i belonged ..i already smelled like one of the dead ..haha it was all over .finaly.
evrythin went black there was nothin more left foe me to hang on to ..and there it was tht last eyelid jus closin tick ...tick....tick
i was done.
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is d sum1 dieing??
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trying to analyse what was written..its been 6hr n 7 mins..*mind not working*..whens the part 2 out?
ahh well frankly to be honest i didnt know i rote this .. i was zoned out anyway ill do sumthin to it hope it gets good cross ur fingers
i think its brilliant
oh thank u my fellow humans..
and @priya ..oh thnaks :P:D
nize! ...u creative genii... horizon wuld sure love ur contributions... *Hint
@barat ..thanks man really apreceate it :P if i fin the stry which i cant seem to make head or tail of ill post it in long live our editor
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